
Idea 1 for synopsis
See snippets of her day (looks like any normal day)
The audience can hear the girls parents in the background - yelling, banging? It's muffled
She does not react to this
House is pristine but when we see her go into her parents room to get something, it's very different (messy, cluttered, alcohol, cigarettes)
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establishing shot of house/room
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wakes up - alarm? - birds eye view
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shot of phone/ message or something - replies "yeah it's nothing"
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"Bang" - she looks towards room
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makes way downstairs
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breakfast scene
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hear parents leave and goes upstairs to get something/ clean up parents room etc
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fade out to white as she leaves (face on)
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Titles
Idea 2 for synopsis (Final idea)
Looking more at the psychological and emotional abuse rather than physical
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Shot of the door, slow zoom
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Shot of 'mother' tapping fingers
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shot of clock, ticking
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no music only ticking and tapping
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silhouette of ash through glass door
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Tries to close door as quietly as possible
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Tapping stops as door shuts
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sneaks upstairs, mum texts 'where have you been?'
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Schedule printed out on bed with everything for week, mainly chores - weigh yourself?
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pulls out journal from under bed
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chart, highlights weight
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text from mother 'get down here now'
